lijepe komplementarne boje...
simpa je Ti Dži

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ne čini ti se da se možda malo tuku ta crvena i zelena?
ili je taman?
(sve me zanima)

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Excellent choice of model (as seems to be your talent) And good colors! The only things that might improve it is to place a large black surface outside the frame to one side of her. The lighting is very diffused so if you could simply subtract light from one side of her, it would create the effect of having a more directional light. Also, the green shirt and purse get a little lost in the green foliage behind her... if you could make them stand out a little more in some way it would greatly enhance the image. You asked for advanced critique... You know I like your work, so please don't take offense Look forward to seeing more!

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ja volim te "sukobe" komplementarnih boja..mada u teoriji treba izbjegavati te kombinacije, pogotovo na portretima, ovdje se ništa ne "tuče"...žuta-plava, crvena-zelena...sve su to meni fine kombinacije koje treba znati pripasati da lijepo izgledaju zajedno...ti si uspjela čist' fino..

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you've been very helpful.

btw interesting part about the lighting.

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Another great shot Mony! I loved the color composition - the green and the pink-red betewen her tshirt/hat and the field in the background. The model is wonderfull...look like Natalie Portman in this shot The soft light and the DoF complete the good effect of the scene.

I really do enjoy the contrast of colors! (correct terminology?! X])

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sve super, al zakaj taj kopirajt na tom mjestu? kaj nemoze to malo negdi sastrane?

jedino što, možda, odlači pogled je ova bijela zgrada iza njene glave...ali, ne smeta toliko da bi se moglo smatrati greškom..
vidiš, sviđa mi se što si napisala ispod fotografije da je u komercijalne svrhe tako da si mi uštedila par redaka teksta...
zašto to pišem? zato što sam znao ovdje (a i ne samo ovdje) nalijetati na autore koji su poslali čistu komercijalnu (stock) fotografiju ne naglasivši to (mada je iz aviona vidljivo da se radi o fotki lišenoj bilo kakve umjetničke pretenzije) i kada im to (dobronamjerno) napomeneš i kažeš da bi fotka bila idealna za reklamu ili naslovnicu modnog časopisa ne nailazim na razumijevanje...ti si jasno rekla da se radi o fotografiji koja ima prvenstveno komercijalnu namjenu a po mojem skromnom mišljenju, ova fotografija ima sve elemente koji zadovaoljavaju kriterije potrebne da bi neka fotografija poslužila za reklamu: tehnički je besprijekorna, boje su intenzivne i primamljive, dakle, privlače pažnju što je osnovna bit dobre reklamne fotografije...nisi imala nikakve umjetničke pretenzije (mada si svojim dosadašnjim radom dokazala da imaš itekako razvijen vizualni senzibilitet i da znaš "zapakirati" podznačenje u svoje fotografije), fotografija je lijepa, privlačna i odlično realizirana...

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Very "critical" critique by artman indeed... only ONE thing that I wud do / have done is that the "action" she is portraying in the shot and the facial expression she has... I wud change it. She is in a place where anyone wud feel Ecstatic.. here with her hand in that purse... it looks like she is going to pull out her gun and shoot!! lol..

... Play with facial expression and pay attention to the hands (esp.)!! and try blending the person's "action" . "body language" with the enviornment!

Overall.. AMAZING AMAZING capture and precise light control~

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